Done

By Ashi, on February 15th, 2010

After work
it’s done
you left

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3 comments to Done

devika

15 February, 2010 at 5:52

good senryu, Ashi!

after work
they all sit -
overtime or gossip

i was one who preferred to leave work dot on time,

wishes,
devika
Magyar

15 February, 2010 at 15:36

after work
I forget that time
awakened

The “other” day begins.
Ashi

16 February, 2010 at 8:32

Ha ha to both you Devika and Magyar, two very revealing poems.
Thanks very much