This morning

By Ashi, on March 11th, 2009

This grey morning
while rain is pouring
spring lights break the ground

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Previous posted at Spring Haiku 2009

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6 comments to This morning

Magyar

11 March, 2009 at 16:45

one cold drop
invades the nape of my neck
five strike back

As I reach back and slap that cold, invasive drop sliding down the back of my neck… I can fully appreciate your -gray morning-tercet! Fine one Jens !
Andrew

13 March, 2009 at 5:49

add “very cold” to it and you describe here so well!
devika

16 March, 2009 at 2:47

Not raining
else, its the same here, Ashi

Good one,

wishes,
devika
jem

16 March, 2009 at 14:59

‘break the ground’ is a great phrase. It really feels like the light is active.
rauf

17 March, 2009 at 3:40

Let there be heat comes before ‘Let there be light’
Let there be rain and Let there be water
But all in right measures Ashi
and above all we need health and peace of mind to enjoy the glory.

Hope you are doing fine Ashi
My regards to Bodil
Ashi

17 March, 2009 at 9:22

Thanks Magyar for the poem and comment.

Thanks Andrew for the additionally words.

Thank you Devika.

Thanks Jem.

Thank you Rauf and yes its all fine here and I hope the same for you, I will relay your regards to Bodil.