Ashi Words

Poems – inspiration from life

Complaining

By Ashi, on February 1st, 2010

Complaining
in so lovely tunes
the bird in the bush

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john mcdonald

February 1, 2010 at 12:34

absolutely love it
Kristin

February 1, 2010 at 14:14

I wish that my complaining sounded this lovely! ha
Wonderful haiku!!!
Ashi

February 2, 2010 at 8:45

Thanks John for reading,

and to you Kirstin likewise.
Magyar

February 4, 2010 at 17:18

__Doesn’t it often seem a debate among the birds? They make some very fine points!
__Love this one Jens! _m
Ashi

February 10, 2010 at 15:22

Thanks Magyar
jem

February 11, 2010 at 13:49

Makes me smile. Sometimes it does sound like they are grumpy and complaining, but it still sounds so much better than when we do it.
Ashi

February 11, 2010 at 18:49

Thanks Jem, yes they can make a negative sound like good thing