Elusive

By Jens, on December 3rd, 2006

Words hard to hold
squeeze the fish to hard
it will elude the grip

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5 comments to Elusive

polona

4 December, 2006 at 21:13

lovely haiga!
Ashi

5 December, 2006 at 8:44

Thanks Polona
john

5 December, 2006 at 10:11

loved this one ashi
Joe

22 May, 2008 at 18:28

These would all be better if you checked your spelling. It really deteriorates the poem to have poor spelling.
Joe

22 May, 2008 at 18:29

Also, a haiku is far too short to repeat words (“hard”)