Blues

By Ashi, on November 3rd, 2006

With blues
comes revelation
quietly I get older.

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7 comments to Blues

Edith

4 November, 2006 at 14:59

Don’t we all? Life is worth living anyway – even more intensly.
Rauf

5 November, 2006 at 1:31

blue is cool and growth is silent
Beautiful image
Andrew

5 November, 2006 at 8:21

We’re all walking on the same path. Wonderful work!
polona

5 November, 2006 at 19:40

quietly or not – we’re all getting older

love this one!
Arshi

6 November, 2006 at 12:53

Lovely lines, couldn’t have said it better ! loved the last one especially i got interested in Haiku after reading a psycho-thriller by Dean Koontz. Keep going, friend !
john mcdonald

8 August, 2007 at 9:56

absolutely love the sketch – haiku good too
Joe

22 May, 2008 at 18:38

Rather nice. can you do it without the adverb? intead of “quietly” try, “in silence”. Adverbs weaken the verb (and the image) when you only have this many words.