With blues
comes revelation
quietly I get older.
With blues
comes revelation
quietly I get older.
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BluesBy Ashi, on November 3rd, 2006
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Don’t we all? Life is worth living anyway – even more intensly.
blue is cool and growth is silent
Beautiful image
We’re all walking on the same path. Wonderful work!
quietly or not – we’re all getting older
love this one!
Lovely lines, couldn’t have said it better ! loved the last one especially
i got interested in Haiku after reading a psycho-thriller by Dean Koontz. Keep going, friend !
absolutely love the sketch – haiku good too
Rather nice. can you do it without the adverb? intead of “quietly” try, “in silence”. Adverbs weaken the verb (and the image) when you only have this many words.